Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain: •Why you have chosen him to write the reference letter •What kind of job you are applying for •Why you think you are suitable for this job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
mail to request you for a reference letter regarding my future job.
I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Recently, I graduated from your most prestigious university and now I am looking for employment in one of the esteemed companies. After a certain point of time, my recruiter requested me to send him a reference letter. During my college days, you are the only professor who knows about me well. Hence
, that is
the only reason I am approaching you for a recommendation mail.
Furthermore
, my university background is completely related to technology. Therefore
, I applied for a Software Developer position in various firms. In addition
, I also
applied for the Data Analyst position because I recently upgraded my skills in the data sector.
Finally
, I would like to share the reason why I chose those jobs with you. First,
I already mentioned that the Software Developer job is something related to my course. Hence
, I can understand the concept of the project easily. Second,
my passion is all about automation. Therefore
, I am excited to learn more about computer science in the future.
I hope you can understand my situation and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
SamSubmitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Task Achievement
Begin by addressing a specific teacher if possible, as 'Dear Sir or Madam' is more formal and less personal. This can particularly strengthen your request for a reference.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider organizing your letter into clearer paragraphs with distinct purposes: introduction and request, explanation of the job you're applying for, and your suitability for the job. This will improve the overall coherence of your letter.
Task Achievement
When describing your suitability for the job, provide specific examples of your skills or experiences related to the job requirements. This will strengthen your argument and make your request more persuasive.
Tone
Your polite and formal tone throughout the letter is appropriate and well-maintained, fitting the context of requesting a favor from a teacher.
Clarity
You've effectively communicated the main purpose of your letter. The overall message is clear, and your request is made with respect and humility.
Closing
Your closing sentence, expressing hope for understanding and looking forward to a response, nicely wraps up the letter. It's polite and shows anticipation without assuming the outcome.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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