The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of Japanese
tourists
who travelled abroad between 1985 and 1995, while
the accompanying graph shows the proportion of Japanese
tourists
visiting Australia
during the same period. Overall
, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend.
Regarding the first graph, it is evident that the number
of Japanese
tourists
travelling overseas grew significantly during the period given. Specifically, the figure started at around 5 million in 1985, and within five years
, it soared to approximately 11 million. The number
remained relatively stable for a couple of years
before experiencing another noticeable increase, peaking at around 15 million in 1995.
Likewise
, the second graph illustrates an increasing trend in the proportion of Japanese
tourists
visiting Australia
. Prior to 1985, the percentage of Japanese
tourists
travelling to Australia
was negligible. However
, over the following years
, the figure grew rapidly. For instance
, it accounted for approximately 5% in 1985, doubled in three years
, dropped to around 4% in 1989, and then
climbed again to reach its highest point in 1993, with over 6%.
In conclusion, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend in the number
of Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad and the proportion of those visiting Australia
between 1985 and 1995Submitted by ryohei.1015.golf on
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