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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people while others argue that humands must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that
animals
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 should not be exploited by city dwellers.
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, some populace argued that the general public must
use
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beasts
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 to overcome their distinct
requirements
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such
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 as
food
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 and
research
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.
This
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 essay will intend to analyse both opinions in detail with relevant examples.
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, I believe that creatures should not be misused by the general public. On the one end,
due to
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animals
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 exploitations, most
animals
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 are on the verge of getting extinct.
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, by virtue of animal hunting and clearing of forests, the total figures of
beasts
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 are reducing at an alarming rate.
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, The latest survey by the "The Times of India" reveals that 60% of creatures have been extinct in India
due to
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 the regular hunting and clearing of forests.
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, in my opinion, the masses should start preserving
animals
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.
On the other hand
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, some conservationists proposed that the general public must
use
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beasts
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 to overcome their distinct
requirements
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such
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 as
food
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 and
research
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. The majority of human
requirements
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such
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 as
food
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, milk, and medicine totally dependent on
beasts
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.
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, recent
research
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 by "Oxford University" claims that 30% of the UK economy depends on the products manufactured by
animals
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. That's why, the masses should
use
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beasts
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 to overcome their distinct
requirements
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. In conclusion,
animals
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 should not be overused by the general public.
whereas
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, some populace advise that the general public must
use
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beasts
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 to overcome their distinct
requirements
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such
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 as
food
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 and
research
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. From my point of view, creatures should not be misused by the general public.
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