Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to orwork in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason s why someoneshould learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Learning a new
language
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is the topic of discussion.
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some think that by
traveling
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and working
in
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abroad, they can learn
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language
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, others, myself included, believe that there are a lot of paths to
learn
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a new tongue. The first reason is that
people
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can
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in
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institute
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because in
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way they can learn the basic lessons easily.
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, there is
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English school called Safir and there are different levels for
people
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with different English knowledge. So, individuals can improve and gain new
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by
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in a class.
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, the second one is about
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a situation about the
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that interest to. Due
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this
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case, they try to speak and act
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the
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they want.
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, a person can
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their friends, siblings and colleagues to talk English and they can do their daily routines in other languages which is not their mother tongue.
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, making a situation like a foreign country can develop the
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. Some may argue that there is one way to learn
new
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language
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and
that is
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about working and
traveling
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out of the mother country because they think in
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case
people
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force to speak to do their tasks every day and
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environment
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makes individuals
to
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learn it.
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,
people
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can speak
in
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other
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another language
other languages
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language
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in their nation and
encourage
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people
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to learn
it
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to
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.
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, these days
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is so jealous and when someone
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someone
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in
different
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language
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, they like to learn it too. To sum it up, in my point of view, there are a lot of ways to gain a new
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such
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as joining a new
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school and
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bringing a foreign situation
to
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your daily
life style
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lifestyle
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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