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In some countries, it can be very difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you thi

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In
this
 essay, we will review the causes of why in some countries, it is harder to get a good job for
people
 older than 50 years, not taking into account their experience. There are many causes of
this
 problem. The first one that we are going to review is efficiency. Most
of
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the
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companies, or whoever is trying to hire someone really, are looking for
the
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 employee
that is
 going to be a better match for the organization. And
a
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reality is that younger
people
 usually have more energy, and can be more structured
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 to the company's needs.
In addition
, we are currently living in a world that flows around technology, technology
that is
 constantly evolving and improving every single day.
For
this
 reason, the organization must keep up to date in
order
 to make progress, and it is
also
 a fact that
people
 over 50 often find more difficulties when using these new technologies.
On the other hand
,
people
 over 50 are still a part of our society, and there are many solutions that are viable for organizations to take in
order
 to maintain the same working performance.
Firstly
, training must be imparted to all employees to get them familiarized with the new and innovative features.
This
 way, they will learn how to use them, keeping them
out
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from getting lost in the process.
Additionally
,
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organizations could change their working schedules in
order
 to be more productive, optimizing the energy of
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 employees.
Lastly
, retirement plans should be more important to give
people
 over fifty the opportunity to live a more adequate life
according to
 their age.
To conclude
, we can see that there are many things we can do to solve
this
 problem.
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 there are many things that are not directly related to the problem, that constantly keep affecting it. We must make a change in
order
 to help
people
 over 50,
to
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keep doing what they love.
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