At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the

last

two or three decades,

enthusiasm

Add an article

the enthusiasm

show examples

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

having children among couples is completely decreased.

Conversely

, some nations' folk are

adolescent

Fix the agreement mistake

adolescents

show examples

rather than senile people. But what are the benefits of

this

situation, and what are the drawbacks? In

this

essay

Add a comma

,essay

show examples

I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions. Let's begin by looking at the advantages of having

young

Add an article

a young

show examples

society in a

country

. One of the main positive points is that if the

country

industrialize

Change the verb form

industrializes

show examples

and has a variety of factories involved in

manufacture

Add an article

the manufacture

show examples

of goods

secondary

Correct word choice

and secondary

show examples

industries

along with

natural resources like coal mine in a primary industry; it can not be suffered from the lack of workforce. There is no doubt that under

such

circumstance

Fix the agreement mistake

circumstances

show examples

, not only

the

Add a missing verb

do the

show examples

majority

Change preposition

of youngesters

show examples

youngesters

Correct your spelling

youngsters

get a decent job but it

also

generates tax income for the

country

. What's more,

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

high percentage of the development has been

occured

Correct your spelling

occurred

by teenagers who are innovators and are eager to follow their skills,

talents

Correct word choice

and talents

show examples

. A good example of

this

would be athletes. They can win medals and

taking

Change the form of the verb

take

show examples

great pride. Turning to the other side of the argument, unemployment is a major problem. Most fully grown adults who get

Add an article

a certificate

the certificate

show examples

certificate

Fix the agreement mistake

certificates

show examples

in their

favorite

Change the spelling

favourite

show examples

majors can hardly find a job and they

also

are worked with low salaries without any job securities like perks,

increment

Fix the agreement mistake

increments

show examples

,

promotion

Fix the agreement mistake

promotions

show examples

and so on;

furthermore

, in some

cases

Add a comma

,cases

show examples

these

matures

Change the verb form

mature

show examples

become redundant annually. Needless to say, exceedingly

university_graduated

Correct your spelling

university graduates

working

Replace the word

work

show examples

in

a fields

Correct the article-noun agreement

a field

fields

show examples

out

Change preposition

outside

show examples

of their Professions;

for example

,

an

Change the article

a

show examples

civil engineer commences working as a

track

Correct your spelling

truck

show examples

driver.

Moreover

, being jobless lays the foundation to enhance the rate of drug abuse in the

country

especially in slum areas where poverty is prevalent. In conclusion, in developing countries like Pakistan over half of society

are

Correct subject-verb agreement

is

show examples

under

Change preposition

in

show examples

their thirties, have positives like labour in manufacturing industries and

also

has negatives

such

as joblessness which deteriorates the situation and

raising

Wrong verb form

raises

show examples

crime

Correct article usage

the crime

show examples

rate.

Personally

Add a comma

,Personally

show examples

I believe that the benefits outweigh any negatives if

government

Add an article

the government

show examples

could

gaurantees

Correct your spelling

guarantee

guarantees

the future of youth.