Global warming is now generally agreed to be a very serious problem . what are the causes of hlobal warming and what should governments do to reduce it

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Currently, global warming is
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big issue all around the world. The changing world is
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having
a big impact on nature. There are many reasons
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this
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arising issue which can be tackled by
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insital
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instal
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step
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by
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the Goverment
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Goverment
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government
. I am going to explain the issue and
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solution
in the upcoming
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paragraph
paragraphs
. There is no
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doubt
that automobile
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vehicle
made
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people
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life so easy but it
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giving a huge bad impact on
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the enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
as well. Cars and
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motor
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vehicle
vehicles
are causing so much pollution in the
enviroment
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environment
which
further
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lead
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to global warming.
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, in 2019,
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New India news article showed that about 79
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global
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warming is inclining
due to
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motor
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vehicle
gases. In
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business minded
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world,
people
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are developing
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big industries to earn more and more money.
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, they are cutting the trees which is
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a reason
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global warming.
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, recently One upon
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times
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news showed that in Mumbai one
business man
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businessman
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devepoled
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developed
cotton making
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indusry
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industry
in 200
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acre
property
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properties
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.
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in
huge
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amount of
deforteration
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deforestation
happed.
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,
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government
should
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people
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as possible to cycles which help to decline the amount
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pollution.
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,
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government
should make some bars
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cutting
of
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trees to aware
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people
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about the importance
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trees in
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the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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