A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problem if it is not managed correctly. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

The advancement of the tourism industry makes a sizable profit for popular tourist destinations around the world.

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those

cities

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’ economies and employment can be boosted, it can have adverse effects on the environment and

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of living. Being attractive to

tourists

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provides

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with many advantages.

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, it is a source of revenue. Since

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spend money on a wide variety of activities,

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’ budgets increase and their economies boost. Grater employment possibilities

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the second advantage of

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.

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of various visitors’ needs being met, many jobs have been created to meet their expectations.

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, most of the

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have unspoiled nature that draws

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and are more likely to have better job opportunities related to the tourism industry, compared with other

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that are not popular tourist destinations. Tourism has far more disadvantages than advantages.

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with, it threatens the environment by building hotels and restaurants. Since most new buildings are situated

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jungles, many trees should be cut down, damaging wildlife habitat.

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, more visitors lead to more waste and litter. It causes irreparable damage to the environment. Aside from that, the

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of living is rising.Providing

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requirements instantly is costly.

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, it has adverse effects on the

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of living in the long run. To clarify, the apartment rent piece is influenced by the rent of

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short-term accommodation. In conclusion,

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popular tourist destinations facilitate the annual revenue and job opportunities of the

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.

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, at the time,

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and ruin the

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and increase the

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of goods and accommodations.

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,

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overweigh

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the advantages

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