You want to sell your Laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you are selling the Laptop • Describe the Laptop. Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

Dear Mia, It has been a long

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since I have written to you.How have you been?How are the kids doing?I remember the

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when we spoke you were looking for a Macbook for your daughter as she was going to join high school next year. I was planning to sell my laptop on the marketplace and suddenly I remembered you and thought it would be best to give you to some other person because

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MacBook is very precious to me as it was gifted to me by my father after I graduated. As you know I am not an ios lover and prefer Windows over it

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thought I will purchase a new one. My Macbook is the 2019 edition and comes with a charger.It is silver in colour and has a cover case on both sides.It is lightweight and slim and easy to carry anywhere.If you are interested you can come over and have a look at it and decide for yourself. The best

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would be on 25th of

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month as I will be back from work early.You can visit me and have a look at it and we can spend some

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together. Convey my regards to your husband and love for your children. Best wishes, Nida.

mudassir1219

Apr 20, 2023

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