Write about the following topic. Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that in the

last

few decades, the weight issues amongst

children

have drastically increased. Some

people

argue that the primary responsibility

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this

problem lies with the government. I completely disagree with

this

point of view. In

this

essay, I will explain why I believe that more than the city

adminitration

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administration

, the families and the schooling authorities are responsible for the issue.

Firstly

, it is important to understand that the primary responsibility of

the

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government bodies is to take care of the community at large.

While

the officials ensure the well-being of the residents in a locality, they do not influence the

habbits

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habits

and the lifestyle of the

people

.

For example

, a city mayor can make sure that every residential block has an open gym in the public parks.

However

, using the facility is an individual's choice and the

people

in power cannot enforce

use

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the use

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of the

equipments

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on anyone.

Further

, obesity is a lifestyle issue, and

children

are falling prey to

this

peril because of

lack

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a lack

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of physical movements, and unhealthy eating

habbits

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habits

.

Parent

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Parents

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and teachers, who spend the most time around the

children

, should encourage them to dedicate more time towards doing physical activity.

For instance

, folks at home should deliberately reduce

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for little ones, and incentivize them after hours of playing outdoors.

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Similarly

, schools should focus more on building regular

excercising

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exercising

regime, and

re-enfore

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re-enforce

healthy eating

habbits

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habits

within students. In conclusion, the government has a very limited role to play when it comes to an

individuals'

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lifestyle choices. In my opinion, the accountability for

increasing

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an increasing

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number

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the number

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of overweight

children

resides with the

people

closer

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to the

kidst

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kids

,

such

as

parent

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parents

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, families and teachers.