The graph shows how elderly people in the USA spent their free time between 1980 and 2010.
The line graph shows how old people in the USA spent their free time from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it is obvious that hiking showed a gradual increment throughout the period, exceeding watching TV, reading, and theatre
by almost 80%. In the 1980s, watching TV was the favorite
activity for elders in the USA Change the spelling
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while
it was placed at 60%. In the contrast, surfing the Internet was nearly 5% which was the lowest percentage among other activities. 50% of elderly people in the USA spent their free time in theatre
but, it gradually declined to 30% in the 1990s. In the 2000s, activities such
as hiking, reading, and surfing the Internet experienced a rapid surge for a decade. Reading placed at 20% in the 2000s then
, it extremely soared to 60% in the 2010s, exceeding theatre
activity. Surfing the Internet was almost 15% in the 2000s then
, it also
surged to 50% in 2010, surpassing theatre
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