Some people think that it's good for a country's culture to show imported foreign films and TV programs. Other people think that country should develop their own film and TV programs instead.

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and
TV
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programs
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are now becoming one of the most important spiritual dishes for everyone. Some people love to watch something
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made in foreign countries and think that it’s good for their own country's culture and there will be a significant boost in the cooperation in economy, culture and politics among nations.
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, others believe that it’s vital for their countries to develop their own entertainment industry. Actually, not only new knowledge about other countries and cultures does foreign
films
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and
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programs
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bring us, but
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we can access different entertainment from anywhere which prevents us from being bored. The Internet is now providing many different types of
films
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or
programs
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like Korean
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, European football or Hollywood
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. We can easily choose what we want to watch or listen to.
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, many local film or entertainment companies can take a huge opportunity to experience the technology and expertise of other foreign companies in the same trade.
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, the VFC in Vietnam has followed a path of remaking some foreign
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or cooperating with Japanese or Korean companies to produce
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and
Tv
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programs
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.
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, it is
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necessary to develop it for any nation.
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copying or importing foreign
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and
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programs
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is not bad, exploiting the distinct intensity of each country
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needs to be concerned carefully. It can be a great way to show the face of a nation and raise the pride of all citizens in
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country.
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means everyone will feel more interested in their country’s culture and history and they can be even more united and give more respect to the government. In conclusion,each of the two opinions has its own merits that we can hardly deny of them. And in my opinion, it will be more interesting if you watch both imported foreign
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and
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shows and domestic
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productions.
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