Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private company. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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present world, many surveys with technology are being implemented by our

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gradually. Thanks to

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, we can enjoy our lives more comfortably and leisurely. It is agreed that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the

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. There are two reasons why I agree and it could be issues of justification and budget of institutions which could conduct the research.

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, the investigation with science from private corporations would be conducted with a lack of justification.

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, individual companies have a lot of connections which is related to other enterprises and

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would affect their survey and makes the resulting change somehow. Unfortunately, we can assure you whether

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is fair or not.

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,

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makes it clear that private companies should not carry out and control the survey.

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, personal institution probably has a problem with money which makes the quality of the survey decrease when it is bigger than they expect.

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public institution always secures

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budget for certain projects and prepares alternative ways to cover all emergency situations.

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, they have enough employees to control and manage all projects. For that reason, the project could be protected and conducted by the

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. To summarise, the personal corporation does not have enough ability to handle projects which are related to science and the

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should take care of it. If we do not follow

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way, it will fall down to the other way or the results will come in the direction that others want, rather than in the direction that everyone wants.