Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language cause seriosu social problemsi as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Nowadays,
people
residing in different nations hard contrasting views about
this
statement.
World
globalization increase strictly nearly
last
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two decades. If we compared
to
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it to
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the past,
mostly
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most
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humans
born somewhere live
in
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there and die where they
born
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were born
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.
However
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now
World
is a very big town for mankind to live
on
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in
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it
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apply
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. So most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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humans
connect with each other so
people
speak
different
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a different
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language
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languages
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and
this
may cause social or practical
problems
in life.
This
essay shall touch upon
this
statement and find out my view.
To begin
with,
World
changes so much in
last
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the last
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two decades. New inventions
about
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in
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communication, transportation and technology caused
to
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apply
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globalization.
Humans
can live wherever they want all around the
World
.
However
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,However
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people
can not always adopt the
language
where they live. They have one
mother
language
but you have to know another
language
to communicate with
people
effectively. But most
of
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the
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apply
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humans
can not talk like their
mother
language
and it caused serious
problems
in society.
For
example
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,example
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people
who migrate
another
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to another
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country always complain about missing their homeland,
actually
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,actually
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they miss their friends, families and they miss
talk
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talking
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in their
mother
language
and
understand
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understanding
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people
in that way.
On the other hand
,
this
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these
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people
also
caused
socail
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social
problems
in their lives. They can not explain themselves properly so they get
harm
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harmed
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. They
struggel
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struggle
struggled
in their social lives.
For
example
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they will be alone in there. They can not reach everything quickly. There
is
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are
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a lot of disadvantages
of
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to
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not being understood. In a nutshell,
speak
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speaking
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a different
language
which is not
mother
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the mother
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language
can cause
a
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apply
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very important social and practical
problems
. In my
view
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,view
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I agree
to
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with
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this
statement because
speak
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speaking
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a foreign
language
is
very
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a very
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difficult thing and
also
usage of that
language
is the
most
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hardest thing in the
World
because of that using
second
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a second
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language
can cause serious
problems
.
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