Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language cause seriosu social problemsi as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Nowadays,
people
residing in different nations hard contrasting views about this
statement. World
globalization increase strictly nearly last
two decades. If we compared Correct article usage
the last
to
the past, Correct pronoun usage
it to
mostly
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most
humans
born somewhere live in
there and die where they Change preposition
apply
born
. Add a missing verb
were born
However
now Add a comma
,However
World
is a very big town for mankind to live on
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in
it
. So most Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
humans
connect with each other so people
speak different
Add an article
a different
language
and Fix the agreement mistake
languages
this
may cause social or practical problems
in life. This
essay shall touch upon this
statement and find out my view.
To begin
with, World
changes so much in last
two decades. New inventions Correct article usage
the last
about
communication, transportation and technology caused Change preposition
in
to
globalization. Change preposition
apply
Humans
can live wherever they want all around the World
. However
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,However
people
can not always adopt the language
where they live. They have one mother
language
but you have to know another language
to communicate with people
effectively. But most of
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
humans
can not talk like their mother
language
and it caused serious problems
in society. For
example
Add a comma
,example
people
who migrate another
country always complain about missing their homeland, Change preposition
to another
actually
they miss their friends, families and they miss Add a comma
,actually
talk
in their Wrong verb form
talking
mother
language
and understand
Wrong verb form
understanding
people
in that way.
On the other hand
, this
Correct determiner usage
these
people
also
caused socail
Correct your spelling
social
problems
in their lives. They can not explain themselves properly so they get harm
. They Wrong verb form
harmed
struggel
in their social lives. Correct your spelling
struggle
struggled
For
example
they will be alone in there. They can not reach everything quickly. There Add a comma
,example
is
a lot of disadvantages Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
not being understood.
In a nutshell, Change preposition
to
speak
a different Wrong verb form
speaking
language
which is not mother
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the mother
language
can cause a
very important social and practical Correct article usage
apply
problems
. In my view
I agree Add a comma
,view
to
Change preposition
with
this
statement because speak
a foreign Wrong verb form
speaking
language
is very
difficult thing and Add an article
a very
also
usage of that language
is the most
hardest thing in the Change the adjective
apply
World
because of that using second
Correct article usage
a second
language
can cause serious problems
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