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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.
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A glance at the two tables provided reveals the
number
 of exchange
students
 from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa in 2007 and 2009. As can be seen from the tables, the
number
 of
students
 from Europe had an increase,
while
 the
number
 of
students
 from Australia remained unchanged. In 2007, almost one-third of European exchange
students
 were from France,
however
, the count of
students
 slightly fell from 61 to 60 in 2009. As for the
number
 of
students
 from Germany, it rose exponentially from 27 to 62.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
students
 from the Netherlands remained the same as before, which was 36. Considering the
number
 of exchange
students
 from Australia in Europe, the data indicates that France and Germany both experienced significant growth. The
number
 of
students
 in France surged from 37 to 58,
while
 that in Germany rose from 18 to 26.
In contrast
, the
number
 of
students
 in the Netherlands plummeted from 32 to 18.
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