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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009.
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A glance at the two tables provided reveals the
number
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 of exchange
students
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 from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa in 2007 and 2009. As can be seen from the tables, the
number
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 of
students
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 from Europe had an increase,
while
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 the
number
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 of
students
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 from Australia remained unchanged. In 2007, almost one-third of European exchange
students
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 were from France,
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, the count of
students
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 slightly fell from 61 to 60 in 2009. As for the
number
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 of
students
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 from Germany, it rose exponentially from 27 to 62.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 from the Netherlands remained the same as before, which was 36. Considering the
number
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 of exchange
students
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 from Australia in Europe, the data indicates that France and Germany both experienced significant growth. The
number
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 of
students
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 in France surged from 37 to 58,
while
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 that in Germany rose from 18 to 26.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of
students
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 in the Netherlands plummeted from 32 to 18.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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