The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
The table compares the various modes of transport in Britain from 1985 to 2000 and their average
miles
travelled per person per year. All units are measured in
miles
.
Overall
, it is evident that cars were the most popular vehicle used for migration throughout the period
while
taxes were used less. In ,general the
distance
travelled by a person for a year saw substantial growth.
To begin
with, in 1985 the most significant means of migrating was by car as the annual
distance
travelled was 3199
miles
which grew dramatically to 4806
miles
in 2000. The next popular modes of transportation in 1985 were other and local
buses
covering distances not higher than 500
miles
annually each. In 2000
whereas
other modes of transportation increased in importance to 585
miles
, the significance of using local
buses
dropped to 274
miles
.
In contrast
, taxis were not very common to British citizens as it average
distance
covered in 1985 was the least with just 13
miles
, their travelled
distance
rose to 42
miles
in 2000. Bicycles and long-
distance
buses
were the next unpopular ways to migrate both recorded an annual travelled
distance
which was slightly higher than 50
miles
at the beginning of the period,
while
bicycles experienced a downward trend, long-
distance
buses
witnessed a significant growth of 70
miles
. The total average
miles
travelled by all the of transport was 4740
miles
in 1985
miles
which rose considerably to 6475
miles
.
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