The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
given maps illustrate the current condition and the future planning for the industrial part of Norbiton
city
.
according to
the first map. there is a
river
in the north of the
city
. In the
centre
of town , there is a
square
that two streets lead to it. there are eight factories around the
square
and streets. in the future planned development, the
river
will be divided into two parts and a street will be established on it. in the
centre
of the metropolis
besides
the
square
, two streets will be increased to four .one of them leads to the
river
and another will be led to another
square
in the south of the
city
.,
moreover
there will be made seven housing in the
city
,one of them is in the northern part of the
city
. In ,addition a medical
centre
and shops will be created around the
square
and a school can be seen in the east of town.,
furthermore
a playground will be designed in the south of the
river
.
overall
, there are many changes that are going to be made in the
city
. All factories will be wiped out and
instead
of ,them we can see housing. in ,add a playground, a school ,a medical
centre
and shops will be created in the
city
.
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  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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