The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar chart provides information about the share of the population who hold
science
qualifications in Malaysia
and Singapore
. Overall
, people
in the two countries who had no quality in science
dominated on a large scale, whereas
, to be surprise
, there is a low percentage of citizens who hold a Master's and Bachelor's Change the verb form
be surprised
degree
.
It is clear that
the two countries have a significant difference in the proportion of people
who hold a Bachelor's degree
, while
the number is 20% in Singapore
however
it is a mere 10% in Malaysia
. In addition
, the level of school leaving exams in science
is slightly higher in Malaysia
than in Singapore
, where about 35% of people
have a science
qualification and in Singapore
is 5% lower.
The key feature that emerges in Master's degree
and people
who had no qualification in science
. There are less than 5% of people
in both countries who have a Master's degree
and in contrast
, more than 60% of people
have no qualification in Malaysia
and Singapore
.Submitted by lesley on
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