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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
The bar chart provides information about the share of the population who hold
science
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 qualifications in
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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.
Overall
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,
people
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 in the two countries who had no quality in
science
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 dominated on a large scale,
whereas
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, to
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, there is a low percentage of citizens who hold a Master's and Bachelor's
degree
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.
It is clear that
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 the two countries have a significant difference in the proportion of
people
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 who hold a Bachelor's
degree
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,
while
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 the number is 20% in
Singapore
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however
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 it is a mere 10% in
Malaysia
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.
In addition
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, the level of school leaving exams in
science
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 is slightly higher in
Malaysia
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 than in
Singapore
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, where about 35% of
people
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 have a
science
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 qualification and in
Singapore
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 is 5% lower. The key feature that emerges in Master's
degree
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 and
people
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 who had no qualification in
science
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. There are less than 5% of
people
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 in both countries who have a Master's
degree
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 and
in contrast
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, more than 60% of
people
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 have no qualification in
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words science, malaysia, singapore, people, degree with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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