The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the house costs in three different countries from the years 1997 to 2014.
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country
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the country
a
experience a sharp increase in the average property costs. Change the article
an
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apply
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country
b and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
c
experienced fluctuations over the period. Use synonyms
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, all countries stabilised Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
In regards to Linking Words
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the country
a
, the average house prices rose significantly from about 225k in 2000 to just over 5000k in 2003. After Correct your spelling
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that
there was a slight drop for the following three years until it rose up again to about 520k before remaining stable for the rest of the period.
It is notable that Add a comma
,that
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country
b and Fix the agreement mistake
countries
c
underwent an Use synonyms
up and down
trend. From the year 1997, the market gradually increased with a sharp rise in 2005 with about 235k for Add a hyphen
up-and-down
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country
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the country
a
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A
while
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had a very minimal increase of up to 199k in 2007 from 100k in 1997. The graph clearly indicates that Use synonyms
country
b increased the costs from 2008 reaching its highest point of 5000k before stabilising to just below 500k in 2014. Use synonyms
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c
witnessed a dramatic fall in 2008Use synonyms
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but peaked Remove the comma
apply
up
again Change preposition
apply
to
251k in 2013.Change preposition
at
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