The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and the present. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two maps illustrate the conversion of the settlement of Ryemouth
village
between 1995 and the actual day,
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen clearly, that Ryemouth Linking Words
village
has undertaken a significant change in the open spaces Use synonyms
as well as
entertaining zones from 1995 to the present day,
Glancing at the map reveals that, in 1995 exactly in the northeast of the Linking Words
village
was farmland that has been made into a golf field Use synonyms
while
the forest park which was situated just under the farmland had been transformed presently to 2 Tennis areas, Linking Words
besides
the car park that has been added to the Linking Words
village
near the hotel in the southeast of the Use synonyms
village
,
In the extreme south where the sea is, the apartments along the coast are replaced with a fishing market, which receives the fish from the fishing port recently constructed, Use synonyms
whereas
the shop alongside the road which is situated in the west of the Linking Words
village
has been converted to a restaurant, Use synonyms
moreover
, a road has been built in the up northeast of the Linking Words
village
Use synonyms
along with
2 houses,Linking Words
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