The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables illustrate how many Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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between 1999 and 2004 were sold in five European countries.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the amount of
coffee
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and
bananas
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in that period increased except that of
bananas
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in Belgium and Sweden. Looking at the table more specifically, when it comes to the
figure
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for
coffee
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in five countries, in the UK the
sales
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of
coffee
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skyrocketed in 2004, at 20
million
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euro
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and that of
coffee
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doubled in Switzerland,
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in Denmark and Belgium, the
figure
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for
coffee
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sales
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increased slightly to 2
million
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and 1.7
million
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euro respectively. The
number
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of
coffee
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sales
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in Sweden
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rose a little, at 1
million
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euro
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euros
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. In the case of the
sales
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of
bananas
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in the same period, The
number
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of
sales
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of
bananas
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in the UK and Switzerland increased greatly and the
figure
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for
sales
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reached 47
million
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and
million
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euros. The
number
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of
sales
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in Denmark rose in 2004, at 4
million
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euros as well.
However
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, the
number
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of
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bananas
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banana
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sales
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halved in Belgium in 2004 and the
figure
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for
bananas
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also
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decreased to 0.9
million
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euros as well.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, figure, sales, million, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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