A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - give details of the course you took at the university - explain why you recommend the university - give some advice about how to apply

Dear Kate, I'm really excited to hear that you are thinking about joining the same
course
that I did at my
university
. I would like to give you advice on
this
course
as you requested. I would like to talk about one of the best
course
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of the
university
that I
taken
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and it was "Embedded System & VLSI Design". It was
very
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demanding
course
at the time and
still
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it is. Particularly, the
course
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a number of practical sessions which is useful for your career.
Moreover
, the way of
teaching
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style of professors is so grateful and easy to understand. The reason why I recommend you to select
this
university
is that it provides you
basic
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knowledge which is very essential for your future job.
Additionally
, it has a lot of contacts
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MNC
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for job placement.
Consequently
, you will gain benefits
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job assistance.
Lastly
, you can apply for the
course
on the
university
website by filling
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form.
Furthermore
, you can
also
go to college and apply from
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office. Let me know if you need any
further
help from my side. Hope to hear from you soon. Warmest regards,
Milav
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Milan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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