Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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it is clear that

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the environmental

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is vital to deal with in recent years. Some people supposed that the most urgent environmental

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of our time is the loss of specific types of plants and animals,

such

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as polar

bear

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.

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, other people hold a belief that

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is not

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problem

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we should care about.

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, there are still many essential problems we should aware of. In my opinion, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth. On the one hand, there are more and more particular species of plants and animals gradually

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. Take polar bears

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. Because the global average temperature

keep

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raising,

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it will result in sea levels going up.

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phenomenon,

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will lead to a significant impact on

habitants

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habitats

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, where polar bears live in. The other example is fish,

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is

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the global average temperature increase, Many fishes might

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not sustain their lives, because the

sea

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seawater

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water

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getting hotter. Based on

these environmental

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this environmental problem

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problem

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, the loss of endangered creatures absolutely is an important

problem

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of our time.

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, there

are

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some environmental

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problem

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problems

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we should focus on,

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as air,

pollutions

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pollution

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, and

water

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contaminations

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contamination

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number of

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population

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gets higher, and the amount of cars

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increases. That will cause large carbon dioxide emissions, which

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to air pollution.

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,

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water

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contamination is attributed to many factories

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waste

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water

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illegally.

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, there is not only one environmental

problem

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n our life. In conclusion, there are lots of environmental

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problem

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problems

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in recent years, like the loss of endangered plants and animals, air

pollutions

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pollution

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,

water

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contaminations

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contamination

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, and so on.

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, I firmly believe that there are still many environmental issues. We should take action to prevent them

,

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and put an effort into

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our earth.