The goverment is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the goverment is wasting money and should spend money addressing the problem of public.

Nowadays
the
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space and the exploration of
the
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other planets are
one
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some
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of the most popular research
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. Famous
componies
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companies
and governments are investing
money
to support
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technology and everybody
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that they will find some new useful things.
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a new place where we can live. It
seem
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to be a good business with
a
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enourmos
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enormous
benefit but like in every risky
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things
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it is possible that
at
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the end we will realize that the whole process was
a
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wasting
money
. I agree that we have problems int
he
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Earth which are important and
necessery
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necessary
to solve them. For instance
in
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the
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developing countries
develope
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develop
health care, stop starvation and globally
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protect the
enviorment
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environment
.
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hand the space
reserches
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research
are helpful
to modernized
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our life and
invent
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new technology tools or
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discovering
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now
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new
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things. My opinion is that we can spend
money
to
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both of them
in
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the same time. The constantly growing population require
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find
new
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place where we can live because our planet has a space- and nutrition limit.
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during the
exploration
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exploration,
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we can discover new elements or
built
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new electric devices which will
helpful
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in our everyday life. We haven’t got too much information about astrology but
this
is the best reason why we should invest
money
and
corrected
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this
defect. In my
conclusion
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we need to invest
money
in the Earth and
also
in the other planets exploration. We shouldn’t concentrate
to
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one thing because we
wont’t
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won’t
develop or just really slowly.
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