The Chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph above illustrates the percentage of
coffee
buying, whether it is the fresh or Use synonyms
instant
type, including the consumption ratio of Use synonyms
coffee
and tea in cafes in five locations in Australia within the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks. Namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. The data for each survey object is varying in all five cities.
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First,
when we look in general, the proportion of Australians that choose Linking Words
coffee
shops is consistently higher than other observed events across five cities. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, the smallest percentage belongs to the category of people who purchase fresh Linking Words
coffee
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Then
, in the middle of them is the category for Linking Words
instant
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coffee
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Secondly
, when we analyse thoroughly, only Adelaine’s report isn't similar to the rest. Linking Words
Instead
of getting their Linking Words
drinks
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coffee
shops, making their own Use synonyms
drinks
is preferable for them, specifically Use synonyms
instant
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drinks
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However
, the gap between Linking Words
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choice and the rest isn’t far away, only less than 5%.
In conclusion, each resident of Australia has various preferences for types of Linking Words
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coffee
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instant
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and brewing Use synonyms
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beans.Use synonyms
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