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Furthermore, the disappearance of languages can have a negative impact on the environment. Many indigenous languages are closely linked to the natural world and contain valuable knowledge about local flora and fauna. When these languages disappear, so does this knowledge, which can have serious consequences for environmental conservation and sustainability.

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In
this
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 present
world
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, several
languages
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 will disappear every year. Some
people
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 believe there is no need to worry because ,in a
world
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 with fewer
languages
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, our lives will be easier.
Although
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 I agree that reducing
language
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 barriers can make
people
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's life will be more convenient, its negative outcome should
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 be considered.
To begin
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 with, individuals and firms over the
world
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 can benefit from a
world
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 with
less
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fewer
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language
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 obstacles. They are more likely to sit together to discuss projects or ideas for earning money.
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, several decades ago, there were various dialects across China,
the
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and the
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 merchants from
northern
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the northern
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 couldn't discuss with southern suppliers accurately which even lead to misunderstanding because they didn't have a unified
language
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. Afterwards, the administrators decided to promote
mandarin
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Mandarin
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 to resolve
this
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 issue. Today many Chinese youngers have forgotten their dialect, and there is no barrier
for
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to
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 communication across the country anymore,
people
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 are able to share projects and ideas together for earning money easily, which has significantly improved
economy
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the economy
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 and made
people
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's life easier.
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, translation will be more
accuracy
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accurate
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 between
few
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a few
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languages
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,
this
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 can help individuals
aquire
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acquire
 information more effectively. Taking
Korean
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the Korean
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language
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 as an example, Korean is a phonetic
language
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 which is
hardly
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hard
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 to describe some meanings accurately.
Thus
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, some official files
such
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 as
constitution
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constitutions
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 or statutes have Chinese explanatory notes on the bottom to strengthen the meaning of the original text.
This
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 can cause inconvenience for
people
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 to read the file.
Therefore
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, with fewer
languages
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, the meanings of important
infomations
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information
 can be translated more
accuracy
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accurately
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 which is beneficial for
people
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 to understand.
On the other hand
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, the reduction of
languages
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 will pose a threat
on
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to
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 cultural diversity which will deprive
people
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 of the opportunity to appreciate different cultures.
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, feeling exotic
cultural
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culture
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 from the
language
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 is
an
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 unique experience part of travel. If
people
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 travel to a country that uses
same
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the same
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languages
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 the travel experience will be alleviated. Similar things can make our lives monotonous and tedious. In conclusion,
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 I agree the tendency of
language
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 vanishing is able to bring some benefits
such
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 as easier communication for commerce or
covenience
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convenience
 in obtaining information, it has
negative
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a negative
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 impact on cultural diversity.

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