The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists traveling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
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The given bar graph and line chart illustrate the count of
tourists
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from Japan travelling abroad and the proportion of
tourists
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that Australia is receiving respectively. Here we can observe that the number of Japanese nationals leaving the country for vacation increased threefold over a decade span from 1985 to 1995.
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, the count before 1985 was zero. The number of
tourists
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in both of these graphs is hiking in each corresponding
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.
However
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, there is a minimal decline in the proportion of Japanese
tourists
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in 1991 in comparison to the previous
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, but it recovered in the following
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and
then
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rose continuously.
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, the percentage of these
tourists
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going to Australia
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kept growing up until 1989. In
this
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year
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the abroad travellers visiting
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island nation tanked only to rise back again in the next
year
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and it kept rising till 1993. In 1994 it had a minute reduction,
although
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those travelling out of Japan did not reduce.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist market
  • overseas travel
  • tourism industry
  • international campaigns
  • economic prosperity
  • travel preferences
  • market share
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trend
  • attracting
  • destination
  • variability
  • contributing factors
  • currency exchange rates
  • speculate
  • tourism policies
  • competitive markets
  • popularity
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