Many people around the world are still relying on the private car as their major mean of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest some solutions

Nowadays there is a tendency

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lot of

people

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, that a private car is the main way of movement. As a matter of fact, a lot of problems are caused by

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trend, but we always can find a solution.

To begin

with, we can not deny, that having your own car is very comfortable and it is easy to get to the destination

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if you are an owner of a personal vehicle.

However

, it is causing many difficulties,

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as heavy traffic.

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, almost in all

metropolises

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is almost impossible to go where you want without getting stuck in a traffic jam.

Secondly

, there are a lot of cars on the road, which are polluting the environment. The emissions of

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vehicles are playing a significant role in the contamination of the atmosphere. Now we can see thousands of researches about

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issue. Actually, the amount of toxic waste is huge and

people

must not close their eyes to

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problem. But every trouble has a solution. From my point of view, we need to decrease the amount of time, that

people

can spend riding their vehicles.

Moreover

, governments need to contribute to the increase

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the popularity of public transport.

For example

by making

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cheaper and more affordable for individuals.

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people

, who control

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should make public transport more comfortable inside and more punctual. In

conclusion

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we see major issues of

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pollution

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environment and traffic jams, which are caused by

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growth

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popularity

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the popularity

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of buying personal vehicles. But by making public transport more convenient we can solve them.