the pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to present day
The maps show changes in the layout of a
park
between 1980 and the present. In general, the park
is now more accessible and has several new facilities to serve different recreational demands of the public.In 1980, there was one pathway running through the park
from the west gate to the south gate. A number of trees were located in the northeast, and flowers were planted along the south wall. There was also
a pond with several benches around it situated on the eastern side of the park
. Between 1980 and now, the path was removed and replaced with a new path which leads to all four sides of the park
, and essentially divides it into four different areas. In the south western
corner, the pond and benches are still intact, but the flowers in that area have been replaced with bushes. A new picnic area with tables and a barbecue grill has been set up in the northeastern corner, Correct your spelling
southwestern
while
the southeastern corner is now a dedicated playing field.Submitted by hihihahahoho on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite