The graphs below show the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod university.

The pie charts compare the various reasons why two categories of scholars selected Dorrifod University.

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, it is evident that both groups selected the school because it was close to home and the course offered.

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individuals of 18-24 years least considered the reputation of teaching staff, students of 25 and above considered little about the facilities on campus.

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, the most popular reason for choosing Dorrifod University among both categories was the fact that it was close to home, with each group getting a rate slightly higher than 35%. The second significant factor for the two groups was the course offered, with 35% of aged 18-24 years compared to 24% of those aged 25 and over.

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, among undergraduates aged 18-,24 the least vital factors they considered were related to industry and reputation of teaching staff attracting 4% and 2% respectively.

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, facilities on campus and the opportunity to study abroad as part of the course were the least essential reasons undergraduates of 25 and over considered accounting for 2% and 3% respectively.

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The graphs below show the different reasons of two groups of students to choose Dorrifod university.

A group of people think that the penalty for each kind of crime needs to equal, another group says that before giving punishment wants to analyse the stimulantt and motivation of the crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In June 2005,an experimental flu vaccine was monitored in a large country town on females only.

People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities. To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?