The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph indicates the
number
of people who travelled to a Caribbean Use synonyms
island
from 2010 to 2017.
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Overall
, there was a significant rise in the total Linking Words
number
of visitors to a Caribbean Use synonyms
island
. Use synonyms
In particular
, the Linking Words
figure
for visitors on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
showed the most significant change over the seven-year period.
In 2010, the Use synonyms
number
of vacationers on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
and on the Use synonyms
island
began at 0.25 Use synonyms
million
and 0.78 Use synonyms
million
respectively. The following year, the Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
rose slightly to 0.5 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of visitors on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
remained unchanged. From 2013 to 2015, the Use synonyms
figure
for tourists staying on the Use synonyms
island
remained stable at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
.
Between 2015 and 2016, the Use synonyms
number
of people staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
surpassed that of the Use synonyms
island
. Over the following two years, the Use synonyms
figure
for Use synonyms
cruise
ship passengers reached a peak of 2 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of tourists on the Use synonyms
island
fluctuated around 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. The total Use synonyms
number
of tourists rose gradually from 1 Use synonyms
million
to 3.5 Use synonyms
million
throughout the entire period.Use synonyms
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