The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph indicates the
number
of people who travelled to a Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, there was a significant rise in the total number
of visitors to a Caribbean island
. In particular
, the figure
for visitors on cruise
ships
showed the most significant change over the seven-year period.
In 2010, the number
of vacationers on cruise
ships
and on the island
began at 0.25 million
and 0.78 million
respectively. The following year, the figure
for cruise
ships
rose slightly to 0.5 million
, while
the number
of visitors on cruise
ships
remained unchanged. From 2013 to 2015, the figure
for tourists staying on the island
remained stable at 1.5 million
.
Between 2015 and 2016, the number
of people staying on cruise
ships
surpassed that of the island
. Over the following two years, the figure
for cruise
ship passengers reached a peak of 2 million
, while
the number
of tourists on the island
fluctuated around 1.5 million
. The total number
of tourists rose gradually from 1 million
to 3.5 million
throughout the entire period.Submitted by lym1049 on
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