The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph indicates the
number
of people who travelled to a Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, there was a significant rise in the total
number
of visitors to a Caribbean
island
.
In particular
, the
figure
for visitors on
cruise
ships
showed the most significant change over the seven-year period. In 2010, the
number
of vacationers on
cruise
ships
and on the
island
began at 0.25
million
and 0.78
million
respectively. The following year, the
figure
for
cruise
ships
rose slightly to 0.5
million
,
while
the
number
of visitors on
cruise
ships
remained unchanged. From 2013 to 2015, the
figure
for tourists staying on the
island
remained stable at 1.5
million
. Between 2015 and 2016, the
number
of people staying on
cruise
ships
surpassed that of the
island
. Over the following two years, the
figure
for
cruise
ship passengers reached a peak of 2
million
,
while
the
number
of tourists on the
island
fluctuated around 1.5
million
. The total
number
of tourists rose gradually from 1
million
to 3.5
million
throughout the entire period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, figure, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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