The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below show an industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton and the planned future development of the site.
The first picture shows the layout of an industrial Use synonyms
area
in the town of Norbiton, and the second shows the future development of the site.
The two illustrations compare the layout and features of an industrial Use synonyms
area
in the town of Norbiton nowUse synonyms
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and in the future.
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It is clear that
some main changes will be completely made in terms of the use of the Linking Words
area
. There will be developments with regard to shops and housing. At present, we can see that there are eight factories, all of which will be demolished. Use synonyms
However
, it appears that the plan is to build seven housings for residents in various places. One will be built at the top of the Linking Words
area
, three will be located in the centre along the road below the river, and the remaining will be built in the southeastern part of the Use synonyms
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.
It seems that the road will be expanded across the river to the north. There will be on the smaller ring road near the medical centre. Some new buildings Use synonyms
such
as shops, a medical centre, a playground, and a school will be Linking Words
also
constructed.Linking Words
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