The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below show an industrial
area
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in the town of Norbiton and the planned future development of the site. The first picture shows the layout of an industrial
area
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in the town of Norbiton, and the second shows the future development of the site. The two illustrations compare the layout and features of an industrial
area
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in the town of Norbiton now
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and in the future.
It is clear that
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some main changes will be completely made in terms of the use of the
area
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. There will be developments with regard to shops and housing. At present, we can see that there are eight factories, all of which will be demolished.
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, it appears that the plan is to build seven housings for residents in various places. One will be built at the top of the
area
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, three will be located in the centre along the road below the river, and the remaining will be built in the southeastern part of the
area
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. It seems that the road will be expanded across the river to the north. There will be on the smaller ring road near the medical centre. Some new buildings
such
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as shops, a medical centre, a playground, and a school will be
also
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constructed.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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