The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps below show an industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton and the planned future development of the site.
The first picture shows the layout of an industrial area
in the town of Norbiton, and the second shows the future development of the site.
The two illustrations compare the layout and features of an industrial area
in the town of Norbiton now,
and in the future.
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It is clear that
some main changes will be completely made in terms of the use of the area
. There will be developments with regard to shops and housing. At present, we can see that there are eight factories, all of which will be demolished. However
, it appears that the plan is to build seven housings for residents in various places. One will be built at the top of the area
, three will be located in the centre along the road below the river, and the remaining will be built in the southeastern part of the area
.
It seems that the road will be expanded across the river to the north. There will be on the smaller ring road near the medical centre. Some new buildings such
as shops, a medical centre, a playground, and a school will be also
constructed.Submitted by lym1049 on
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