The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph above illustrates how many
people
visited the Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017 and their staying places. This
data specifically depicts people
who choose to stay on cruise ships, island
, and Fix the agreement mistake
islands
total
of both categories.
In general, there is a significant increase in the number of tourists in Add an article
a total
this
period. The highest peak of growth belongs to the cruise ships group because the number in 2017 adds up eight
times from the earliest year in 2010. Change preposition
to eight
On the other hand
, the portion of people
who preferred land only multiplied approximately two times.
Then
, when we looked more in detail regarding the land group, there was a stagnation era from 2013 to 2015 with 1.5 Millions of
visitors. Change preposition
apply
This
pattern only appeared in this
category and it can be safe to assume that in these years people
started to like travelling in the Caribbean on cruise ships. However
, it didn’t make a clear impact on the total group line because it continuously rose up from 2013 until 2015.Submitted by pranipradani on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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