The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.
The bar charts
illustrates
the percentage of Change the verb form
illustrate
the
UK residents interested in six different sports in three different years (1995,2000,2005)
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Overall
, The
walking is the most popular physical activity in all surveyed years, Correct article usage
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while
golf is the least popular activity. Additionally
, the percentage of people
who enjoyed walking, swimming and rugby increased whereas
the figures
for people
those
who enjoyed other sports Correct pronoun usage
apply
decreases
over the period.
1995, walking is the most popular activity chosen by Wrong verb form
decreased
the
40% of Correct article usage
apply
people
, while
only around 17% of people
to chose golf and swimming. Then
tennis and snokker
were almost similar with 30% and 29% approximately. Correct your spelling
snooker
Meanwhile
approximately 25% of survey respondents chose rugby Add a comma
,Meanwhile
to
their Change preposition
as
preffered
sport.
In 2005, The figure Correct your spelling
preferred
of
walking rose significantly Change preposition
for
with
just under 45%, but there is a significant decline in the Change preposition
to
figures
for tennis and sneaker to about 22% each. The figures
of
golf almost remained Change preposition
for
same
. Correct article usage
the same
In contrast
, figures
for swimming and rugby grow significantly.to over with
25% each.Change preposition
apply
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