You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The figure illustrates the process of producing
gaden
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garden
fertilizer
by
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recycled organic garbage. The
prosess
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process
of making compost
are
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involved
into
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5 steps, including preparing
for
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apply
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the container and materials, waiting for its
fully
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fermentation, and collecting the compost. At
first,
a plastic container with holes is essential for the ventilation
prupose
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purposes
. At the second
steps
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of the process, the food, the grass and the newspaper are piled up one after another in the bottle, and the depth of food and grass is subject to be
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15 cm. After that,
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organic waste is tossed into the container.
Thirdly
,
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nitrogen and
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hot water are added to complete the preparation stage. After that, all we need is time.
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waiting for 6 months, the heat and water will release from the holes on the bottle, and the materials inside would ferment enough to turn out to be
compost
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the compost
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that we need.
Finally
, we could use those
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to thrive
the
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garden.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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