You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The figure illustrates the process of producing
gaden
fertilizer Correct your spelling
garden
by
recycled organic garbage. The Change preposition
from
prosess
of making compost Correct your spelling
process
are
involved Change the verb form
is
into
5 steps, including preparing Change preposition
in
for
the container and materials, waiting for its Change preposition
apply
fully
fermentation, and collecting the compost.
At Change the adverb
full
first,
a plastic container with holes is essential for the ventilation prupose
. At the second Correct your spelling
purposes
steps
of the process, the food, the grass and the newspaper are piled up one after another in the bottle, and the depth of food and grass is subject to be Fix the agreement mistake
step
approximate
15 cm. After that, Replace the word
approximately
those
organic waste is tossed into the container. Correct determiner usage
the
Thirdly
, the
nitrogen and Correct article usage
apply
purely
hot water are added to complete the preparation stage.
After that, all we need is time. Change the word
pure
With
waiting for 6 months, the heat and water will release from the holes on the bottle, and the materials inside would ferment enough to turn out to be Change preposition
After
compost
that we need. Correct article usage
the compost
Finally
, we could use those fertilizer
to thrive Fix the agreement mistake
fertilizers
the
garden.Change preposition
in the
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