the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The two maps display
Correct article usage
the entranceway
entranceway
to a Fix the agreement mistake
entranceways
city
hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that many facilities were improved around the City
Hospital by including a bus
station, car
park
, and roundabout.
In the part, Ring Road
was surrounded by a hospital and connected with Hospital Road
in the front of the hospital. The staff and public car
park
were the south of the City
Hospital. Additionally
, the six bus
stops were in front of the park
along Hospital Road
. Moreover
, City
Road
paralleled the City
Hospital with Hospital Road
in 2007.
In 2010, it can be observed that all bus
stops were combined into a bus
station, which was located in the west-south of the hospital on Hospital Road
. Two traffic circles were introduced on the north and south of Hospital Road
and connected to City
Road
and Ring Road
. The staff car
park
remained the same. However
, the public car
park
was relocated to the east of the hospital on Ring Road
.Submitted by Jeyul on
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