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Demand for oil and gas is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity.do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The demand for oil and gas has been growing with the surge of world population and industrialisation. Some
people
 suggest that
further
exploration
 in rural and undeveloped
areas
 is
of
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importance
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 to maintain the
fuel
 supplies. In the rest of
this
 essay, I will demonstrate the pros and cons of giving my opinion. To commence with, it is beneficial to execute
fuel
 prohibition in rural or undeveloped regions. There are many undiscovered
fuel
 supplies across continents
as well as
 under the seas. The supply of oil and gas is the crux to determine the stock markets around the globe as
people
 and businesses rely heavily on fuels for daily life and operations. It is mandatory to explore
extra
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 supply of oil and gas in rural and undiscovered regions.
Exploration
 for
fuel
 sources in obscure
areas
, aside from that, can save
people
 from
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 to the toxicity made during
fuel
 extractions. As
fuel
 explorations and extractions require machines to probe underground,
this
 may detrimental to the building structures if it operates near the urban regions. In turn,
people
's daily activities and business will be affected. In turn, it is recommended to undergo
fuel
exploration
 in distant
areas
 and
the
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undiscovered
areas
.
However
, we should
also
 pay attention to the sequela brought by
fuel
exploration
 and extraction, especially in those undiscovered and remote
areas
. As multitudes of
fuel
 supplies are being discovered and used,
fuel
 becomes precious and rare. The lessening in
fuel
 supply can cause price
increment
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 in
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 run, which increases the financial burden for
people
. By way of conclusion, it can be foreseen that
,
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fuel
exploration
 in rural and undiscovered
areas
 is of importance and a must to maintain a sufficient
fuel
 supply. Never should we waste the
fuel
 supply prodigally.
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