The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three diﬀerent years who said they were interested in certain sports.

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The line chart illustrates the type of

people

's preference for six sports (foot, swim, rugby, snooker, tennis and

golf

) in different years (1995, 2000, 2005) in the UK. Looking from an

overall

perspective, it is readily apparent that walking is the most popular sport throughout all statistical data.

However

people

lack interest in

golf

, which has least the number in three years. In 1995,

people

prefer to walk rather than do other sports in their life. The next popular choice would be snooker and tennis, which account for 30% and 28% respectively. Swim (22%) and rugby (24%) followed by, higher than

golf

, about 17%. The contrast between 2000 and 2005 is, foot, rugby, snooker and

golf

have more

people

's preferences as opposed to swim which has about 26% in 2005 slightly lower than the 2000's percentage (28%). Both numbers 2000 and 2005 in tennis display are 23%, a considerable point.

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The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three diﬀerent years who said they were interested in certain sports.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In some countries, physical education is a compulsory subject for the leaving certificate. Some people suggest that this practice be abolished. Which view do you agree with? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

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