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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?

#youth #crimes #parents #skills
Many people think that
educate
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parents
 with parental
skills
 is the best method to decrease Juvenile delinquencies. Even when
parents
 have a great influence, there are still many external factors that can be improved to positively affect a child's development. On the one hand,
parents
 with good parental
skills
 have a great impact on
children
’s behaviour. In fact, minors tend to have compatible development
to
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with
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 social norms under parental orientation. Since
parents
 are
those
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in
the
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apply
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closet
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close
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 proximity to their
children
, educating
parents
 with parental
skills
 is necessary to minimise the possibility of juvenile delinquency.
However
, educating the youth at home is not enough in many cases. Nowadays, most
children
 have to spend their time at school
where
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parents
 can not always keep an eye
on
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. Scientists have proven that 60% of
children
 who are sent to kindergarten will have an influence
of
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 the surrounding environment
such
 as teachers and friends.
Therefore
,
while
 the factors affecting
children
 are increasing, teacher education has
also
 become an important method.
In other words
, teacher training can help improve the child's development environment.
Besides
, the use of different means of communication could
also
 affect minors' thinking and
behavirours
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behaviour
, which proves that
parents
 with good parental
skills
is
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 not the only method
that is
 responsible for the reduction of youth crimes. In conclusion, consolidating
skills
 to educate
children
 is a good way to limit
the
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juvenile criminal
behavior
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behaviour
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, but it should be applied concurrently with other methods for
best
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the best
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 effect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mandatory
  • equip
  • psychological
  • constructively
  • foster
  • empowered
  • isolated
  • escalation
  • multi-faceted approach
  • eradicate
  • peer influence
  • socio-economic status
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