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It is important for children to learn what is right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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Children
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 training is
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 vital duties of parents. Teaching little
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 to distinguish between good and bad is a basic way to treat children. some people opine that
punishment
 is important to educate them and it should be adopted at an early age. In
this
 essay, I will explain both how far I
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 with
this
 opinion and how much parents and teachers are free to punish their kids.
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 should not be
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 first way to treat a kid because it stimulates aggression inside children and
it
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can create some serious mental problems for them in the future.
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, when a parent always behaves badly
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 their son and kicks him, he may become an obsessive person in future who always is rude and impolite in front of adults,
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also
 may become a criminal
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a few years later.
Thus
,
punishment
 can
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this
 aggressive
behavior
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 to the next generation and
this
 can make serious spiritual problems in society. Prioritizing options
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 educating
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youngsters is the vital
things
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 that families and teachers have to do as their role models. They have to distinguish when they can
cheer-up
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 and when they should face some
behavioral
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 problems of the young
one
. Trial and error are the best options, if it did not answer, they can deprive the teenager
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 some equipment and welfare tools. In comparison, if the kids did something good, they can give them some encouragement to repeat that good thing again. In conclusion,
punishment
 and encouragement should be adopted
along with
 each other. Families and parents as
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important person of everyone in their lives should learn a lot of things from
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book
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 and digital media to know exactly what should they do to treat
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their little
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 in a perfect way.
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