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Olympic games very very important and respected in the past. However, some people say that technological improvements have reduced the importance of Olympic games in this 21st-century do you agree or disagree with this

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Sports generally unite the world together, it embraces cultural differences both in skin colour and language. The
Olympic
 competition gives the opportunity to individuals to showcase their talents and be awarded accolades. In my ,opinion
technology
 has played a major role in the
Olympic
games
 which
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 will be discussing.
To begin
 with,
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 disagree with the idea that
technology
 has reduced the importance of the
Olympic
games
. The world is changing and the use of different
technology
 has increased the importance of
games
. Considering that the Olympics happen once in 4 years! let us look into soccer
games
for instance
, the way some offside goals are been recorded in previous years is ridiculous which decreases people's interest in the game but recently the use of VAR (Video Assitance Refree ) has shaped soccer game tremendously.
secondly
,
Technology
 is that it limits the number of manpower in different
games
. There are so many
games
 played in the competition and
technology
 has been able to broadcast
this
 event around the globe via radio stations and Tv stations, with the help of the installation of satellites. In Conclusion, I believe the use of
technology
 has added value to the
Olympic
games
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generate more revenue for the government.
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