Some People Say Music is A Good Way Of Bringing People Of Different Cultures And Ages Together

A group of humans believe that
music
has a brilliant way to gather people from diverse
cultures
and ages in a place. I partially agree with
this
idea. First of all,
although
music
is an art, everyone does not like it. Many mankind loves other art
such
as cinema, and sculpture,so it does not attractive to them and they do not listen to it ,
therefore
it cannot collect family and it is not a terrific way for it .For ,example my brother does not crazy about it so he has not gone to any concerts yet
Also
he does not listen to them at all, so he does not go to cultural sites where
music
lovers are there.
On the other hand
,
music
is a common language among humans and different
cultures
. Many people from different
cultures
love it and are mad about it.
music
makes them relax and gives them self-confidence, so they follow any kind of
music
worldwide and it is a great idea to bring them to a region with
music
.,
Moreover
,it is one of the reasons for happiness for humans. If they listen to
music
, they will become delighted, so it helps them to have a great time and can handle their problems in life more and more when they pay attention to it. For ,instance there are many carnival musicians in the world that one of them being in Brazil. population from all over the world with a variety of
cultures
and different ranges of ages assemble with one another. They listen to
music
and dance with each other.
To sum up
,
although
many groups of people do not like
music
and they love other art and do not go to any place where musicians play, I believe that
due to
the joyous side of
music
and creative self-esteem and happiness among them. It is a perfect idea that gets together the public through it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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