The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart shows the destinations chosen by
Anthropology
graduates
and it is categorized into six sections. Also
, the table below the pie chart shows the salaries of Anthropology
graduates
after five years of work
experience. The table is separated into four different ranges of salaries and compares three different fields of work
.
More than half of Anthropology
graduates
started full time
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work
and postgraduate study together. Some of the Anthropology
graduates
could not find a suitable job or postgraduate studies. These kinds of graduates
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Anthropology
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. In addition
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graduates
studied in a postgraduate course.
The table shows that the rates of the freelance consultants and the government sector employees
are close to each other at different ranges of salaries. The employees
of the private companies earned more than the other two types of employees
, ranging between 25.000$ to 74.999$ . Specifically, they earned over two times in the range of 50.000$-74.999$. But in the range of 75.000$-100.000$, the other two types of employees
had much higher wealth than the private companies employees
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