The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The pie chart shows the destinations chosen by
Anthropology
graduates
and it is categorized into six sections.
Also
, the table below the pie chart shows the salaries of
Anthropology
graduates
after five years of
work
experience. The table is separated into four different ranges of salaries and compares three different fields of
work
. More than half of
Anthropology
graduates
started
full time
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work
. Fifteen
percent
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per cent
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of
graduates
preferred to
work
part-time.
However
, five
percent
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per cent
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preferred part-time
work
and postgraduate study together. Some of the
Anthropology
graduates
could not find a suitable job or postgraduate studies. These kinds of
graduates
account for twelve per cent. And there is no information about eight
percent
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per cent
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of
Anthropology
graduates
.
In addition
, the total number of
employees
are
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is
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seventy-two
percent
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per cent
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.
Also
, thirteen
percent
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per cent
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of
graduates
studied in a postgraduate course. The table shows that the rates of the freelance consultants and the government sector
employees
are close to each other at different ranges of salaries. The
employees
of the private companies earned more than the other two types of
employees
, ranging between 25.000$ to 74.999$ . Specifically, they earned over two times in the range of 50.000$-74.999$. But in the range of 75.000$-100.000$, the other two types of
employees
had much higher wealth than the private companies
employees
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work, percent, employees with synonyms.
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