The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence (crime). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates arrests for 2 genders by various kinds of offences during the period from 2008 to 2009.

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the chart, the most commonly committed crime by men is considered to be violence against a person. To be more precise, it constituted slightly higher than 30%. At the same time, the proportion of people arrested for theft and handling stolen goods made up approximately 20%, which is 2/3 of the previous category.

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, the number of arrests by types

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as robbery, burglary, fraud and forgery, criminal damage and drug offences fluctuates from 2.5% to 10%,

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the other kinds accounted for 15%. As regards women, it can be seen from the graph that the superior types are violence and theft, in fact, the percentage was equal to more than 30% and exceeded the men's data by 3% and 20%, respectively.

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, robbery, burglary, fraud and forgery, criminal damage and drug offences amounted from 2% to 7%, which is moderately less than for the opposite gender.

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, the other crimes accounted for 2% lower than for males, which is equal to 13%. In conclusion, the distribution of the arrests is quite similar.

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, female leadership is observed in the most popular crimes ,

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, violence and theft.

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