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Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future with countries gradually joining together into larger units

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Most
people
 believe that the
model
 of the
EU
 is the future with
countries
 gradually joining together into larger units. Is that going to be
worldwide
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a worldwide
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 example for life?
EU
model
 is a good example
living
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of living
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quality
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a quality
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 life where
people
 are free to do whatever they want, of course
in
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within
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 the borders of laws.
People
 are free to travel where they feel the best and work the ideal job for them. That
give
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gives
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people
 a chance to realise
in
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apply
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different aspects and live
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a high
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high quality
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high-quality
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 life.
Also
 living in the
EU
model
 country is much easier and less stressful. Taxes are lower and there are prices associated with being part of a free-trade area. That gives a chance to
people
 to think
at
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in
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 other ways and not work only to pay their taxes.
On the other hand
EU
model
countries
 are more modernised and
influensed
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influenced
. With help from all the
countries
 that are part of
EU
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the EU
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 all
countries
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country's
countries'
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 infrastructure is at
good
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a good
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 level, there are no hunger and
people
 are motivated to be more productive. That leads to
calm
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a calm
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 population and more quality
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of live
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live
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life
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 for all. In my opinion, living in the
EU
 is the best way to find new opportunities and live your best
live
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life
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.
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