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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negtive development?

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Over the past few decades, electronic automation has developed significantly. With the development of
this
 automation, some youngsters tend to spend their time using a mobile phone every day.
This
 essay will explore
this
 phenomenon's cause and I think it is a negative development. The rapid development of electronic automation has allowed young people can
use
 smartphones in their daily life.
Children
 tend to
use
 mobile
phones
 to keep in contact with their friends and it can be a good way to make relationships.
Moreover
, nowadays some
children
 can study using smartphones and there are lots of educational applications so it can be an effective way to improve their studies.
In addition
, they can play games with their mobile
phones
 to relieve their stress or enjoy their free time.
However
, it is interfere with their eye health and reading or writing
skills
 when they often
use
 a mobile phone. When
children
 can
use
 a mobile phone, they may be loos eye health and creativity or imagination. It can impact on loos their performance and growth.
Moreover
, nowadays
children
use
 their smartphone's automatic reading or writing
skills
. It can gradually interfere with their reading or writing
skills
 because they can rely on automatic technology so that
children
 do not know how to write or read by themself. In conclusion, the smartphone has developed recently and it is very useful in our life.
Although
children
 can
use
 mobile
phones
 to study or relieve their stress, it can negatively impact their creativity and reading or writing
skills
.
Therefore
,
children
 should spend less time using mobile
phones
.
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