The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012.
To begin
, the line graph illustrates the behaviour of Australian exports over 22 years to four nationals. Japan was the main export destination for Australia back in 1990 but that place was taken over by China in 2012.
First and foremost, India was the least contributor up until 2000, then
showed an upward trend within the next ten years up to the value of around 7%. Furthermore
, it got declined till 2012 with a final portion of 5%. Japan started the journey at about 26% then
gradually decreased whereas
China initially
indicated a very low value close to 1% but after 2000, significant growth can be observed reaching around 28% in 2012.
The US was at its peak back in 2000 while
it got reduced till 2010 then
it showed a positive line during the next upcoming decade. Moreover
, in 2010, India contributed to the exports more than the USA.
To conclude
, even though Japan started the journey off with flying colours the situation got twisted within the next 22 years drastically while
China owned the key role by the year 2012.Submitted by vishvaisuranga on
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