The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.
The given charts provide information on the proportion of male and female full-time
members
in Miami and Florida health
clubs
, and their age
group
distribution in the year 2017.
Overall
, it is observed that males
have a higher number of health
club users compared to females
. When it comes to membership by age
, the majority of male members
fall under the age
group
of 21-45, while
for females
, it is the age
group
of 65 and above. The lowest membership in both
genders was found in the "other" age
group
category.
The bar chart reveals a similar pattern in both
sexes, but it is evident that more males
utilized health
clubs
than females
. From January to May, both
genders had a slight but steady increase in the number of members
attending the health
clubs
, with males
rising from roughly 550 to just above 700, and females
from about 500 to just below 600. Between June to September, there was a significant rise in the number of members
attending the health
clubs
, with males
peaking at more than 800 and females
at approximately 700. There was a gradual decline in attendance in the following months, ending at around 600 for men and above 500 for women.
The pie charts indicate that 55% of male members
and 50% of female members
fall under the age
group
of 21-45. A considerable percentage of elderly female members
were
noted at 31%, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
for elderly male members
, it was 25%. One-fifth of the members
in both
genders belonged to the unspecified age
group
.Submitted by lsc_00000 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words members, health, clubs, age, group, males, females, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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