Write an essay about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food.

A vast variety
in
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cuisines
are
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is
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easily available these days. Amongst all, street
foods
are generally
most
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favoured and
comes
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come
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in different
varities
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varieties
.
However
, the consumption of fast
food
is linked with
plethora
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a plethora
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of merits and demerits which are elucidated in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, there are many advantages of eating street
foods
.
Firstly
,
road side
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roadside
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eatables are available in different
varities
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varieties
which caters to the need of varied taste buds of people. Masses, especially youngsters, easily
gets
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bored with regular meals and always look for alternatives
of
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homemade suppers'.
Secondly
, street
foods
are readily available in the
vincinity
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vicinity
of most dwelling places.
Due to
affordability and availability, people
those
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who cannot cook
due to
many
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any
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reason
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reasons
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of hectic
schedule
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schedules
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and fast-paced
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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can
also
satisfy their hunger.
On the other hand
, fast
food
is
also
termed
as
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junk
food
because of its nutritional value and detrimental effects on an individual's health. These types of
foods
lack the elements of a nutritional diet which can lead to nutrition deficiency if consumed for long on regular basis.
Moreover
, it is scientifically proven that high consumption of fast
food
is making people obese and is
further
linked to malignant diseases. To recapitulate, fast
foods
should be consumed once in a
while
to
statisfy
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satisfy
the cravings in limited proportion.
Healthy
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body makes
the
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healthy mind and only healthy
food
can make us fit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • lifestyles
  • long working hours
  • prepare meals
  • Regular consumption
  • health issues
  • obesity
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • high levels
  • sugars
  • fats
  • salts
  • economic factors
  • cheaper
  • healthier meal options
  • low-income families
  • students
  • cultural influence
  • global expansion
  • adapting menus
  • local tastes
  • integrating
  • environmental concerns
  • packaging waste
  • carbon footprints
  • meat production
  • traditional cuisine
  • decline
  • culinary heritage
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