Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?
Nowadays there are various
mode
of transport available for locomotion from one place to another . Among Fix the agreement mistake
modes
them
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,them
bicycles
are economical as well as
environment friendly, while
cars
are expensive and create harm to nature, but it provides safety
and save
Change the verb form
saves
lot
of time. For the reason of safe Change the article
a lot
travel
, I prefer cars
for transport and this
essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and
of these two Correct word choice
apply
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
travel
system
.
Primarily, considering the advantages, Fix the agreement mistake
systems
bicycles
doesn't
need any fuel consumption for travelling, so Change the verb form
don't
that
they are not exhausting any type Correct word choice
apply
for
harmful gases Change preposition
of
to
the atmosphere. Another positive factor is that riding on Change preposition
into
bicycle
Correct article usage
a bicycle
provide
enormous health benefits for riders Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
such
as reducing the
overweight and booming blood circulation . Correct article usage
apply
For
example
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,example
the
studies reveal that cycling reduces the risk of heart attack Correct article usage
apply
as well
as
Correct your spelling
an
effective
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an effective
technique
to burn fat. Fix the agreement mistake
techniques
On the other
hand
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,hand
by
travelling in Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
car
, it provides provides
speed and Remove the redundancy
apply
safety
for the
people. The modern technologies Correct article usage
apply
which
used in the latest edition are giving more importance Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
safe Change preposition
to
travel
in
roads,where accidents and deaths usually Change preposition
on
happens
. Change the verb form
happen
Apart from
this
,car's
Change noun form
cars
ensuring
Wrong verb form
ensure
a
comfort and relaxation Remove the article
apply
while
travelling for long journeys and the facilities like audio playing and air conditioning give
an immense amount of entertainment during the journey. Change the verb form
gives
Overall
bicycles
have more health benefits and they are environmentally friendly , where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
car's
give speed and Change the noun form
cars
car
safety
.
There are certain disadvantages for
both of these Change preposition
to
travel
modes . Firstly
the bicycles
can be used only for one or two per at a time and they are getting tired very quickly after riding for particular
distance. Add an article
a particular
Hence
it cannot be used for commuting, because the person is exhausted after long physical stress and cannot concentrate on job
. Add an article
the job
Furthermore
, due to
need
Correct article usage
the need
of
Change preposition
for
lot
of balance ,Change the article
a lot
bicycles
are very porn to accidents in windy weather and not
convenient in Add a missing verb
are not
Correct article usage
the rain
rain
season .On the other side Replace the word
rainy
car's
need plenty of fuel for Change noun form
cars
travel
and need regular maintenance for its
proper operation , Correct pronoun usage
their
as a result
, it can cause a financial burden over
the users. Change preposition
on
In addition
to that cars
are not worthy for transport of a single person and it can create a rush in public places where parking slots are restricted. Finally
over use
of Correct your spelling
overuse
this
can boom the effect of global warming by producing huge greenhouse gases to
the atmosphere.Change preposition
into
on
the whole Correct your spelling
On
bicycles
are not providing enough safety
and it
can only use Correct pronoun usage
they
according to
the weather conditions, while
car's
are expensive and Change the noun form
cars
car
harm
to the environment.
In conclusion,Replace the word
harmful
bicycles
provide certain health and economic benefits, but not
suitable for Add a missing verb
are not
long
and Add an article
a long
the long
multi person
travelling. Add a hyphen
multi-person
Car's
provide safe and comfortable journeys, Change noun form
Car
whereas
it
can be expensive and escalate global warming. I prefer to Correct pronoun usage
they
travel
in cars
, where
gives priority Correct word choice
which
for
Change preposition
to
safety
and It is my first choice .Submitted by geokavalackal on
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